Venting A poem by me

[IWantToGoFast]

Go on shout, let it all out!
But the silence is deafening, help,
There are only tears and doubt,
Replacing words and thought.

The tears are drowning me,
It's getting hard to take a breath,
In a world I don't want to be,
Please take me now death!

I'm here a little longer,
Second by second, day … by … day,
Not getting any stronger,
In a game I don't want to play.

 

[ClownMe]

Powerful stuff. It sucks being in pain.

 

[BeansOfRequirement]

Life in hell,
Shotgun shell,
Death knell.

 

[Avril]

Just add in a beat, and it will be a good song, dear.

 

[IWantToGoFast]

Just add in a beat, and it will be a good song, dear.

Thanks, but I can't sing to save my life! lol. Any musicians around?

 

[FuneralCry]

It is well written. I can relate, this life is not meant for me and I would rather not exist.

 

[Callie Arcale]

Nicely done @IWantToGoFast
Welcome to the forum :-)

 

[IWantToGoFast]

It is well written. I can relate, this life is not meant for me and I would rather not exist.

Thank you!

Nicely done @IWantToGoFast
Welcome to the forum :-)

Thank you!