New poemmm

[PurplePerson]

Heyyy sorry I haven't posted a poem in a while.. I kind lost energy to do absolutely anything but I felt like writing a poem todayyyy!

This poem is called "an apple a day"

An apple a day
Keeps the doctor away
You know the old saying
You knew what we were playing

A drop a day
Might make you stay
But with the sidewalk painted gray
You left me in may

I drown in your words
You sharp painful words
But i cant let you see
Just how much it hurt me

I said it was fine
It really was
Because once you were mine
And boy, that was fun

And an apple a day
Kept the doctor away
But here i stay
Looking at you the same

An apple a day
Made me stay

 

[Reeds]

Loved your poem! The rhythm is very even ^^

 

[COP2CON]

Very nice. I wish I could poetry.

 

[kitkatt]

This poem makes me say
AHHH

;( no but for for real good poetry it made me think of the orange peel theory that went viral online. I'd peel that orange but nones been made to peel mine.
Keep writing poems write them all if you like it :)