Beta readers for a manga styled webcomic?

[TheLastGreySky]

Hey so I'm working on a webcomic and it's very much manga styled, and quite mature...
So I'm not sure how to really kind of communicate with people who are into that sort of thing and kind of get feedback.
My concerns aren't so much the art but the sequential storytelling since it's my first time trying to tell a story through a comic.

So any tips or anyone interested please let me know.

 

[Halfhourdays]

It's always cool when people here share their art. A lot of very talented people.

 

[TheLastGreySky]

It's always cool when people here share their art. A lot of very talented people.

Most certainly. I feel like the direct art community doesn't give direct feedback and it's more of either you suck completely and you should quit or that's awesome

 

[Halfhourdays]

Link?

 

[TheLastGreySky]

Link?

It's not done yet. If you want to see it DM me I'll show you once I finish some pages fully. Right now I've got only a little bit done.

 

[Ethel]

Oh,I'm a avid reader of webcomics,can I see?

 

[TheLastGreySky]

Oh,I'm a avid reader of webcomics,can I see?

Yes, I want to redraw parts of the first page (because I'm a overthinker lol) and in a few days I'll DM you it if that's okay.

 

[Manaaja]

I wanna see! You can DM me!

I can give honest critique, soft critique, and no critique at all. Whichever way you want.

 

[Ariii]

I can take a look if you'd like!

 

[whitetaildeer]

Hobbyist writer, and though I haven't had a beta reader, I have beta read for a friend in the past. Try and look for people who write as well, or fellow creatives in general; they naturally tend to give more valuable critique. Best of luck to you

 

[TheLastGreySky]

Wow I really appreciate it, I'll send you guys something soon.

 

[VirtualSnow]

Joining in if you don't mind, pretty curious about it.

 

[TheLastGreySky]

Joining in if you don't mind, pretty curious about it.

For sure I'm just trying to get this parody drawing wrapped up for April Fool's Day, and then I will work on finishing the first page. I'm behind schedule lol

 

[Goodfornothingbish]

Link please haha

 

[TheLastGreySky]

Hey folks brief update, I've been a little behind schedule but I had court today and I should be sending all of you who requested to see the webcomic, page one by Sunday or Monday at the latest.

 

[TheLastGreySky]

Hey I'm ready to share page 1 of my comic.
I'm sorry for the lack of updates.
Anyway, in case Sanctioned compresses the image heavily you can check it out on deviantART at the bottom link too.
I've Started sending messages out but since there's a cool down time it might be a minute before I get them all out.

https://www.deviantart.com/neko4gato/art/Coyotes-Chapter-1-Page-1-preview-1182935659